Ending rough edit
This is a rough cut of the final section of the documentary with some placeholder music. As it stands, it feels far too slow and boring a repetitive. Maybe it could be broken up with more interview sections like the middle section of the documentary which worked well. Also this doesn't feel like a sufficient enough ending. It doesn't feel conclusive or some up documentary. Also this ending doesn't seem to live up to the climax of the previous scenes. We considered perhaps ending around 6:45 mins in after this climax. However, this also didn't feel like the relevant ending for the piece. Despite this, the Solfest still felt like an important part of the documentary, the struggle was to make it interesting and worthy of being an ending. We could try including it along side the credits but it may be confusing and almost separate to the rest of the film. This would defeat the object of trying to bring the documentary to a close.
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