New Solfest Cut
Here I have improved the ending very much so, before it felt too long and slow with the constant slow motion shots with nothing breaking them up. Now I have got rid of some of the slow motion shots and also, similarly to the middle section, have intertwined more section from our interview with her which speeds up the pace and makes the ending more interesting and engrossing. In order to try and bring the documentary to a more significant and effective ending me and kieran had to revisit the interview footage. This would help break up the section, whilst also reinforcing the sense of character attachment that we feel towards Jorunn in the section previously. We were able to find sections that were more conclusive and rounded off the narrative much better than before. This can evidently be seen where Jorunn talks about community love and coming together which is complemented by the busy Solfest streets.
We also decided to revisit old footage from previous trips where we came across our first ever interview with Jorunn that we shot back in the winter. When placing this next to the spring section a big contrast could be seen. This was due to the juxtaposition between the sunny colourful busy spring with the bleak atmosphere of the winter. When put side by side, this created a great deal of impact and made for a powerful ending.
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